Ariana Sylvain
Period 4
English
Ode Poem: a kind of poem dedicated to the praise to a person, place, or thing.
Oh to food,
How much I love thee.
How I feel so good,
When I eat.
Oh to food,
How I need to include
That I get in a good mood,
Especially when I see you.
Oh to food,
You look as good as a pup.
And sometimes you're even previewed,
Sometimes in a cup.
Oh to food,
BOOM! It’s you.
How you are
A sweet bee.
Oh to food,
How I’m going to conclude,
How am I supposed to be tamed
When I hear your nice name.
Alliteration- fast food; nice name
Simile- you look as good as a pup.
Metaphor- how you are a sweet bee
Add title post: ODE TO FOOD
ReplyDeleteChange "Oh to food" to "O food," (sorry for that edit on your rd)
The line "And sometimes you're even previewed" is a little awk
ReplyDeletepost set up: 2/3 PTS
definition: 2/2 PTS
Ode form : 5/5 PTS
creativity: 5/5 PTS
2 alliteration (2/2 pts)
1 simile (2/2 pts)
1 metaphor (2/2 pts)
Thee (2/2 pts)
Repetition (2/2 pts)
Lit device label: 5/5 PTS - 1 each
29 /30 pts